I'm not a Lisa fan, and I don't ordinarily read het, but this was really well done. "Lisa feels like a fucking god" -- just terrific. You make her an interesting, caring person. She really cares about Dean, and yet, "Some days, when Dean has had too much to drink and Ben’s expression is wary and Lisa is pissed off, she wants to strap on the biggest plastic dick she can find and fuck him into the mattress until he actually feels something." She isn't just some sappy, white bread mom. She has backbone, and you know any woman Dean could think twice about would have to. Well done.
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