The ass pic that inspired this piece is a thing of beauty. Given his slim build, that is a pretty damn decent spread. UNF. I may need a moment here.
Every time I hear JD Morgan's name, I picture Javier Bardem (they really do resemble each other!) and the thought of either one of them with Jensen... nggggghh. Okay, I need another moment.
And we haven't even gotten to Jared yet.
The image of Jensen's forearms "slightly corded with sinewy muscle" and Jared "fifty feet tall with abs like granite and a dick like a coke can" - LMAO and UNF at the same time. JFC. It's probably a good thing you don't write Adommy fic, because I think I might actually combust.
Can I also just take a moment to say how much I appreciate your command of the language and your attention to detail, even in a PWP? Nothing worse than running into verb tense issues in the middle of a hot sex scene. Takes me right out of the story.
You had me laughing out of nowhere with stuff like Jensen already knowing Jared's name (OIC), and Misha being insufferable at the thought of not being able to fluff Jared. haha. (although wouldn't he be jonesing to fluff Jensen?) Also when he's still munching on his bagel at the end. bwahahahaha
At one point I kind of wanted JD to just shut the hell up, LOL, especially since I don't think the boys needed any extra encouragement... but then he mentioned how much Jensen wanted Jared and I was like... ohhh.
The money shot was gold, and Jared getting into like he did is just... yeah, I'm repeating myself but damn, girl. So effing hot.
I would never wish more hurricane warnings on you, but if you write stuff like this... hey, let the wind blow!!!
Now I'm embarrassed that I wrote such a long feedback comment. *slinks away*
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Every time I hear JD Morgan's name, I picture Javier Bardem (they really do resemble each other!) and the thought of either one of them with Jensen... nggggghh. Okay, I need another moment.
And we haven't even gotten to Jared yet.
The image of Jensen's forearms "slightly corded with sinewy muscle" and Jared "fifty feet tall with abs like granite and a dick like a coke can" - LMAO and UNF at the same time. JFC. It's probably a good thing you don't write Adommy fic, because I think I might actually combust.
Can I also just take a moment to say how much I appreciate your command of the language and your attention to detail, even in a PWP? Nothing worse than running into verb tense issues in the middle of a hot sex scene. Takes me right out of the story.
You had me laughing out of nowhere with stuff like Jensen already knowing Jared's name (OIC), and Misha being insufferable at the thought of not being able to fluff Jared. haha. (although wouldn't he be jonesing to fluff Jensen?) Also when he's still munching on his bagel at the end. bwahahahaha
At one point I kind of wanted JD to just shut the hell up, LOL, especially since I don't think the boys needed any extra encouragement... but then he mentioned how much Jensen wanted Jared and I was like... ohhh.
The money shot was gold, and Jared getting into like he did is just... yeah, I'm repeating myself but damn, girl. So effing hot.
I would never wish more hurricane warnings on you, but if you write stuff like this... hey, let the wind blow!!!
Now I'm embarrassed that I wrote such a long feedback comment. *slinks away*