EEK So creepy indeed! But you did a fabulous job with it. I love the tone and first person POV here, which I think adds to the creepiness. To know that he's so factual about what he's doing without any care for why. I also like the touches to the actual episode without ripping pieces off outright. Great job!
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Date: 2011-11-07 04:52 pm (UTC)