Well, I've said it before and I'll say it again - you do horror SO well <3
"I wrap my left hand slightly around his throat and feel him swallow. He leans into my touch like touching him is my birthright and not a symptom of my disease. My other hand rests in his hair, which is soft as silk. I want to ask him what kind of conditioner he uses."
So chilling and true to the original feel of the text, but you lied when you said no schmoop (well, OK - it's more unexpected and desperate tenderness):
"I could break his neck in seconds, feel the bone snap against the thin skin of my wrists. I could bend down and gnaw on the tendon between his shoulder and his neck, swallowing him down until he was inside me. I could lay him over the corpse of the girl on my bed and fuck his ass until his insides spill out over my neatly trimmed pubic hair. I could hold him in my arms and murmur “Sammy” against his forehead until all the horror in the world goes away and I feel him sleep pressed against my heartbeat."
A brief moment of sympathy for the monster makes this all the more effective.
Wonderful job, bb and the art is AWESOME *goes to leave ldyghst some love* xxx
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Date: 2011-11-08 08:24 pm (UTC)"I wrap my left hand slightly around his throat and feel him swallow. He leans into my touch like touching him is my birthright and not a symptom of my disease. My other hand rests in his hair, which is soft as silk. I want to ask him what kind of conditioner he uses."
So chilling and true to the original feel of the text, but you lied when you said no schmoop (well, OK - it's more unexpected and desperate tenderness):
"I could break his neck in seconds, feel the bone snap against the thin skin of my wrists. I could bend down and gnaw on the tendon between his shoulder and his neck, swallowing him down until he was inside me. I could lay him over the corpse of the girl on my bed and fuck his ass until his insides spill out over my neatly trimmed pubic hair. I could hold him in my arms and murmur “Sammy” against his forehead until all the horror in the world goes away and I feel him sleep pressed against my heartbeat."
A brief moment of sympathy for the monster makes this all the more effective.
Wonderful job, bb and the art is AWESOME *goes to leave ldyghst some love* xxx