You know the hard thing about writing? (Besides, well... writing.) It's getting everything down so that it plays like a movie in the reader's head. The cinematic quality, as it were. This is your gift. That, and never saying in ten words what you can do in three. Gawd, this is clean. I am officially in awe.
**nuclear fueled heavenly army Two fics, and this is the only error I've found yet. It needs a hyphen. Nuclear-fueled.
The beginning is beautifully done. If she weren't already an incredibly sympathetic character in canon, you'd have made her so with this. And the ending... you know, all this canon I've absorbed, and it hadn't occurred to me that Madison's soul was in purgatory. It makes me a little sad, because she was a good, strong, interesting person who made the right choice at the end, and she never got her happy ending. You've given her one here though.
That's it, I'm friending you whether you like it or not. I need to read your bigbangs.
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Date: 2011-06-14 03:13 am (UTC)**nuclear fueled heavenly army
Two fics, and this is the only error I've found yet. It needs a hyphen. Nuclear-fueled.
The beginning is beautifully done. If she weren't already an incredibly sympathetic character in canon, you'd have made her so with this. And the ending... you know, all this canon I've absorbed, and it hadn't occurred to me that Madison's soul was in purgatory. It makes me a little sad, because she was a good, strong, interesting person who made the right choice at the end, and she never got her happy ending. You've given her one here though.
That's it, I'm friending you whether you like it or not. I need to read your bigbangs.